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EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 66
Indiana

0 posted 2004-01-02 10:57 PM




This poem really means a lot to me...so does this person

I've known you for so little time,
yet i die at your parting
Dont leave me not now
You've been here to long
Im attached, You're attached
But go you shall not
We never had our moment
Our Supernova of time and space
where all our faults passions and love
cease to exsist
You mean too much now
Not just a face, place, or time
None do I need her realy amount
If i could just have you it would end
Please dont let them take you
They were young too
with silly passions but we have this
A parting kiss the lucid place apon your lips
I do not want to be forgotten
tell me you'll be back
It takes to much to forget you
Dont say those tears are in vain
Words written in a telepathic text
Tells that two have met and connected beyond relization, More congregations and many a'time
Will our paths cross.
I shall wait for you there peacefully
Now i know when i say dont leave me is just a wish
But i know we will grow
Now go leave before everything explodes
Take my smile with you and dont forget me
Dont worry, love, our time isn't over and dont cry
(this i say as inside i die)
Goodbye, love, You will always be my shooting star

      p.s I tucked my heart away in your suitcase

Russell

© Copyright 2004 Russell J - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2004-01-02 11:03 PM


Hello Russell

This was such a beautiful outpouring from your heart.  Thank you for sharing your innermost feelings with us.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-01-02 11:16 PM


I wish for you a happy new year and a happy reunion with this special person......jo
garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-01-02 11:29 PM


Oh goodness, Russell. This really touched
my heart. My Darling and I have a long
distance relationship and we have a lot
of these partings from each other.
They hurt worse each time, if that's possible.
Thanks for sharing your feelings with us.
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-02-2004 11:31 PM).]

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2004-01-02 11:38 PM


I can relate so much to this , I have been close to someone online for 7 years and we both known we will never meet , friendhip it can only be , heart to heart across the sea
Hope

lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 93
Indiana
5 posted 2004-01-02 11:45 PM


Russ-

You're such an amazing person. I hope this works out for you. You always have my shoulder babe.

-Steph

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-01-03 12:08 PM


Russ,
   I really enjoyed reading this and can relate to the stars and SuperNOVAS.  I liked the way you carried your universe through your writing.   Good wishes to you in 2004!

                 Sadelite

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2004-01-03 05:11 AM


very touching
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2004-01-06 03:30 AM


Hope good things happen...James
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