Open Poetry #30 |
40 miles has never been so far |
EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
This poem really means a lot to me...so does this person I've known you for so little time, yet i die at your parting Dont leave me not now You've been here to long Im attached, You're attached But go you shall not We never had our moment Our Supernova of time and space where all our faults passions and love cease to exsist You mean too much now Not just a face, place, or time None do I need her realy amount If i could just have you it would end Please dont let them take you They were young too with silly passions but we have this A parting kiss the lucid place apon your lips I do not want to be forgotten tell me you'll be back It takes to much to forget you Dont say those tears are in vain Words written in a telepathic text Tells that two have met and connected beyond relization, More congregations and many a'time Will our paths cross. I shall wait for you there peacefully Now i know when i say dont leave me is just a wish But i know we will grow Now go leave before everything explodes Take my smile with you and dont forget me Dont worry, love, our time isn't over and dont cry (this i say as inside i die) Goodbye, love, You will always be my shooting star p.s I tucked my heart away in your suitcase Russell |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Russell This was such a beautiful outpouring from your heart. Thank you for sharing your innermost feelings with us. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I wish for you a happy new year and a happy reunion with this special person......jo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh goodness, Russell. This really touched my heart. My Darling and I have a long distance relationship and we have a lot of these partings from each other. They hurt worse each time, if that's possible. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us. Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-02-2004 11:31 PM).] |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I can relate so much to this , I have been close to someone online for 7 years and we both known we will never meet , friendhip it can only be , heart to heart across the sea Hope |
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lovejunkie Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 93Indiana |
Russ- You're such an amazing person. I hope this works out for you. You always have my shoulder babe. -Steph |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Russ, I really enjoyed reading this and can relate to the stars and SuperNOVAS. I liked the way you carried your universe through your writing. Good wishes to you in 2004! Sadelite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope good things happen...James |
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