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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany 
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did you hear my heart aching when we met with our heads in the clouds and our feet in the sand i longed to touch your soul and heart but all i could ever touch was your hand try not to touch the walls they might be bloody still you've got to expect your fall if you try to climb that hill it smells like winter, the snow's falling down i'm not what they expect me to be someone's laughing too loud, i guess it's me i don't know if this is the place to feel free give me a word i'll make it a song that could show the world what has gone wrong sing me that song i'll make it a smile that will show the world that it still is worthwhile |
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EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
Great poem. I love how you add snow into it. lol winter is my favorite season so thats the first thing that grabbed me. |
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