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Before, Because, Beyond
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Before, Because, Beyond |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Before, Because, Beyond ~*Marge Tindal*~ Just before the night-in-pause Just before the awakening dawn Just before you softly go Hold me tightly one more time~ Just because the night has ended Just because these lips now wail Just because you cannot stay Hold me until love’s blush grows pale~ Just beyond a blue remember Just beyond this cull of time Just beyond this night of evermore Hold me within this moment sublime~ Just before~ Just because~ Just beyond~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...such a passionate plea...if I were him I would stay, not leave.  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful, Marge. You a such a wonderful writer, and poet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Just before~ Just because~ Just beyond~" Beautiful Marge..simply beautiful. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
"Just before" I wondered "Just because" I was confused "Just beyond" You are there, and i'm to far away!!! Great writing Marge!!!! [This message has been edited by Mystic One (12-30-2003 10:07 PM).] |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Gorgeous! I loved every line. Love, Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is gorgeous, my friend... from the title through the last line... With love like this, if he must go, he'll be back. *S* |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Incredibly understanding. Dave |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Oh what a luscious poem! I am keeping this one for sure. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge this is beautiful for sure. Love, Betty |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I tried to read this one last night in the wee hours, but it would not let me see it...it kept going to "Page Not Found" message, but yeah, it was worth the wait |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marge, this is the most beautiful love poem!! Thank you for sharing it with us. Hugs,  |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
a beautiful write.... |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Would you do a little something for old Jamie? Write many many poems just like this one. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Wow! Womnderful piece. Very well done Marge...this is my #1 must read of the day. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My sincere thanks to each of you for letting me know you enjoyed this little heart-render~ SIS~ He's not going anywhere~  JAMIE~  ... I will ... I promise I will~*Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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