Through tears and my fears

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Open Poetry #30

Through tears and my fears

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2003-12-30 07:53 PM

I guess I failed you again.
another wrong you can smear
on the story of my life.
I wonder how long it's been...
When I had nothing to fear.
Why do you cause so much strife?

You cause all these tears I cry!
Please don't say that you love me.
Love no longer gives confort.
All of my pain you deny.
I hope one day you will see
Loving me is not a sport!

Until than, I'll love you.
Through the tears and my fears.

Love juju...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-12-30 07:56 PM

Juju
Good write, good read, enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-12-30 11:23 PM

Nice...James

EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31

Posts 66
Indiana

3 posted 2003-12-31 01:57 AM

Great poem. Is this something you have or are going through. The poem is very touching because Im very familair with the subject lol...Well i wish you the best of luck with your writing

Russell

lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

4 posted 2003-12-31 02:00 AM

I really like this poem. Especially the "Loving me is not a sport" I know how you feel. It's tough when you put everything into loving someone and they can throw the L word around and not mean it. Sorry if this is really happening to you.

-Steph

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2003-12-31 03:47 AM

I understand this well

this aches

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2003-12-31 02:08 PM

Thankyou...

Juju

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