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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-12-30 06:02 PM

You walk through thoughts
Voyager of my mind
Your footsteps imprinting memories
A beautiful scent left to linger behind

Words of love spoken long ago
Trapped in those now buried memories
Only awoken in depressive times
Releasing all the feelings hidden inside

Draining all the sorrow and sadness away
Filling my heart with a love once had
Taken back to the memories of happiness
Banishing depressive thoughts from mind

Further into these memories I go
Taken higher than heaven
Moonlight, stars and the sun
Into the paradise for me
And my one true love

An beautiful place where angels would stray
To sing their angelic songs
As id find you in the rose gardens
Where we’d walk hand in hand

And all the troubles of the world
Would turn to dust and blow away
Into the future of my days
And this dream would remain

Till the morning light shines through
Awakening me from fantasy
Destroying the world within
Till the days Id need the memories again

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-12-30 08:09 PM

Lee~
This is simply a BEAUTIFUL read~

Happy New Year's wishes to you and yours~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2003-12-31 01:01 AM

I like to 2 or 3 other poems that put the picture together.

It is well written but I had trouble finding the magic that made you write it.

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-31 03:58 AM

I like the ending!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-12-31 12:23 PM

Nice to see you are back Lee!

This is a beautifully written healing dream.

Love and Happy New Year.
Margherita

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2003-12-31 12:46 PM

Lee, I was away for a few weeks and still trying to catch up, but haven't seen your work in quite awhile. It's so good to see you again, and this is a wonderful write. I love the title, ties it all together. Happy New Year! ~K~

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