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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-12-30 07:17 AM


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Written, painted, chiseled in stone
They stand above dissolving bone
Thoughts that stay a longer day
Impressed upon the path of way

Filigree of wayward dust
The outward of the bread, the crust
Stand in islands of discover
Sentiments of loves recover

And so it dapples in the green
Mounds of memory to be seen
Placements of a lover’s vent
A cry in rust a castle spent

But longer still that stays the air
And breathed by children of next year
Is the prima fascia goal?
That stays within the life of soul

For history stays within the air
Re breathed in essence by its share.



© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-12-30 07:31 AM


Good Morning, Sy...

This pounding headache makes it difficult to
sit here and respond much this day...but
I wanted to wish you and Isabel a Very Happy New Year.

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-30-2003 07:31 AM).]

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-12-30 07:45 AM


Deep and beautiful, dear Seymour.

Yes ... the soul holds everything ...
Love and Happy New Year's hugs.
Margherita

LngJhnAg
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3 posted 2003-12-30 07:50 AM


Beautifully spoken, Sy.  Perfect writing..again.
scorpio
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4 posted 2003-12-30 08:28 AM


Another pearl from your pen, Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-12-30 08:36 AM


Maureen,
You have my tea and sympathy and a wish for a Happy New Year.

Margherita
Hugs back and a Hapy New Year.

LngJhnAg
Hy buddie have a drink on me and a very Happy New year.

scorpio
Thank you and my best for a very good year.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-12-30 08:53 AM


Wonderful morning write Sy!
All the best to you and Isabel in 2004!
~Morning hugs, tea and me, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-12-30 08:59 AM


You write of messages and green...
how could I not enjoy this?

Thank you, Sy!


Aimster
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8 posted 2003-12-30 09:05 AM


Sy,

This is lovely, you amaze me with how
easily your words just always float off
the page--beautiful, just beautiful. I
hope you have the most wonderful New Years!
Take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-12-30 09:57 AM


Nancy,
Thank you dear and the very best of a Happy New Year.

Sunshine
My love have the very best of a Happy New Year.

Amy,
A for the Happiest of a very good New Year.

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2003-12-30 11:48 AM


Written, painted, chiseled in stone
They stand above dissolving bone
Thoughts that stay a longer day
Impressed upon the path of way

=================================

And this is exactly what your poetry does as well....
and this moth hangs on your every gifted word.


*ww*




ice
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11 posted 2003-12-30 11:57 AM


Seymour

"Written, painted, chiseled in stone
They stand above dissolving bone"

An extremely poetic way to let this reader in on the contents, and intent of this poem...

Thank you for the introduction, and for the rest of this wonderful piece.

________ice
  ><>

passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-12-30 12:28 PM


still wondering how you do it

and happy that you do

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2003-12-30 12:56 PM


Seymour~
Such a pleasurable read you are~

HAPPY NEW YEAR WISHES SENT YOUR WAY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-12-30 04:12 PM


JM,
Thank you love, I finally got to the post office and you should get the package in a week. WWRS

ice
And I thank you for the read and reply.
Happy New Year

passing,
And I'm happy with your constant reply.


Marge,
Hugs back and a very Happy New Year.

Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2003-12-31 10:20 AM


  

Just wanted to drop in and say hi!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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16 posted 2003-12-31 10:24 AM


How did I miss this yesterday, Seymour?
I'm glad that I didn't today!!
With Love and hugs,
     
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-12-31 10:30 AM


Susan,
Hi and Happy New Year.

Ethel,
Happy New Year sweet.

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18 posted 2003-12-31 01:35 PM


Well just thank goodness you practice what you preach!  Nothing every is as good unless it is shared.  I wisht to share my good wishes for a wonderful, healthy New Year with you and Isabel
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2003-12-31 02:58 PM


Mysteria
Thank you sweetie and a Happy New Year to you too.

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