Open Poetry #30 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Message Written, painted, chiseled in stone They stand above dissolving bone Thoughts that stay a longer day Impressed upon the path of way Filigree of wayward dust The outward of the bread, the crust Stand in islands of discover Sentiments of loves recover And so it dapples in the green Mounds of memory to be seen Placements of a lover’s vent A cry in rust a castle spent But longer still that stays the air And breathed by children of next year Is the prima fascia goal? That stays within the life of soul For history stays within the air Re breathed in essence by its share. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning, Sy... This pounding headache makes it difficult to sit here and respond much this day...but I wanted to wish you and Isabel a Very Happy New Year. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-30-2003 07:31 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deep and beautiful, dear Seymour. Yes ... the soul holds everything ... Love and Happy New Year's hugs. Margherita |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Beautifully spoken, Sy. Perfect writing..again. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Another pearl from your pen, Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, You have my tea and sympathy and a wish for a Happy New Year. Margherita Hugs back and a Hapy New Year. LngJhnAg Hy buddie have a drink on me and a very Happy New year. scorpio Thank you and my best for a very good year. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy! All the best to you and Isabel in 2004! ~Morning hugs, tea and me, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You write of messages and green... how could I not enjoy this? Thank you, Sy! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sy, This is lovely, you amaze me with how easily your words just always float off the page--beautiful, just beautiful. I hope you have the most wonderful New Years! Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you dear and the very best of a Happy New Year. Sunshine My love have the very best of a Happy New Year. Amy, A for the Happiest of a very good New Year. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Written, painted, chiseled in stone They stand above dissolving bone Thoughts that stay a longer day Impressed upon the path of way ================================= And this is exactly what your poetry does as well.... and this moth hangs on your every gifted word. *ww* |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Seymour "Written, painted, chiseled in stone They stand above dissolving bone" An extremely poetic way to let this reader in on the contents, and intent of this poem... Thank you for the introduction, and for the rest of this wonderful piece. ________ice ><> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
still wondering how you do it and happy that you do |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Such a pleasurable read you are~ HAPPY NEW YEAR WISHES SENT YOUR WAY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you love, I finally got to the post office and you should get the package in a week. WWRS ice And I thank you for the read and reply. Happy New Year passing, And I'm happy with your constant reply. Marge, Hugs back and a very Happy New Year. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Just wanted to drop in and say hi! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How did I miss this yesterday, Seymour? I'm glad that I didn't today!! With Love and hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, Hi and Happy New Year. Ethel, Happy New Year sweet. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well just thank goodness you practice what you preach! Nothing every is as good unless it is shared. I wisht to share my good wishes for a wonderful, healthy New Year with you and Isabel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria Thank you sweetie and a Happy New Year to you too. |
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