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Love Song Of Blue
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Love Song Of Blue |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
My beautiful man, I honor you In conclusions, defend you; breasts bared to the bitter cold There is so much I don’t understand, and yet To adore you is as common as my own name Just as selfish as a child, I want you In my arms you are the wealth of heavens kingdom Whatever was forbidden you, lacked substance or color You are an eagle, the white wolf of Seneca…a free born spirit We said good bye, but our hearts heard not in muted green and deafening silence Should you die in my arms we would sail the forever sky together I would not want this aching to contort you, but that the bitter sweet Is ecstasy even as the sword of truth comes to bear And I will take your strike, within my heart And I will stand before you For until I knew the beauty of your rhapsody I had only existed…and you were only a dream Copyright Kkh 12/29/03 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If I thought you watched TV... I would chance to say I might know where your inspiration came from... but it would only be a guess, tied up in a dream... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Goodness K. I have seen you write intensely, with power, conviction, such passion.... I have NEVER seen you write as deeply, as intense as you have within this poem.... Whewwwww... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
TD, I am in total and complete awe...Mag is right again...oh, the intensity and power rising from this piece. Passion and power...what a potion! Exceptional! Patricia |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
You are an artist, musician, painter and sculpture. You majestically bring all these trades into each one of your writes. It is not enough to see the flower with you it becomes true when it is held and that is truly what you offer each time. Thank you. |
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