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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-12-29 04:15 PM


My beautiful man, I honor you
In conclusions, defend you; breasts bared to the bitter cold
There is so much I don’t understand, and yet
To adore you is as common as my own name

Just as selfish as a child, I want you
In my arms you are the wealth of heavens kingdom
Whatever was forbidden you, lacked substance or color
You are an eagle, the white wolf of Seneca…a free born spirit

We said good bye, but our hearts heard not in muted green and deafening silence
Should you die in my arms we would sail the forever sky together
I would not want this aching to contort you, but that the bitter sweet
Is ecstasy even as the sword of truth comes to bear

And I will take your strike, within my heart
And I will stand before you
For until I knew the beauty of your rhapsody
I had only existed…and you were only a dream


Copyright Kkh 12/29/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-12-29 04:16 PM



If I thought you watched TV...
I would chance to say I might know
where your inspiration came from...

but it would only be a guess,
tied up in a dream...

Magnus
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2 posted 2003-12-29 04:31 PM


Goodness K.  I have seen you write intensely,  with power,  conviction,  
such passion....

I have NEVER seen you write as deeply, as
intense as you have within this poem....

Whewwwww...

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
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3 posted 2003-12-29 06:12 PM


TD,
I am in total and complete awe...Mag is right again...oh, the intensity and power rising from this piece.  

Passion and power...what a potion!

Exceptional!

Patricia

Ravenwolfvoyager
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since 2003-12-25
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4 posted 2003-12-29 06:37 PM


You are an artist, musician, painter and sculpture. You majestically bring all these trades into each one of your writes. It is not enough to see the flower with you it becomes true when it is held and that is truly what you offer each time. Thank you.
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