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A Place Of Magical Space..............with one of my pictures
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A Place Of Magical Space..............with one of my pictures |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 If Clouds Could Talk By Ethel_GG ~~**~~ She was in a place of space between awake and asleep The scenes before her eyes such fantasies she wanted to keep It was completely magical this wondrous feeling of flow She held out her arm to look yes, her body was all aglow She felt as if she were floating on a cloud as soft as snow As she lay back to relax looking at scenes unfold so slow They were scenes from the dreams she had dreamt of on many nights With fairies and enchanting fantasies in a land filled with desires and delights There were castles of mystical beauty floating in glorious space She saw herself and her dear Love such peace upon their face They were floating on the same cloud the love and contentment felt she No trouble or trials of this life was there everything was happiness and glee Such fulfillment here they feel in this wonderful place in space Their feelings deep inside show clearly on their face Yes, she was in a place of space between awake and asleep The scenes before her eyes such fantasies she wanted to keep ~~**~~ This is a link to more of my pictures http://community.webshots.com/user/toniasmom [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-27-2003 01:45 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Ethel! This is simply enchanting! Love this keeper...sure do! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is Breath--taking  sweet lady~Lauren~ I had a dream last night |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh, Ethel, the picture and the poem literally took my breath away. Really nice job with the picture. Hooray for you! Yes, she was in a place of space between awake and asleep The scenes before her eyes such fantasies she wanted to keep Loved these lines. Hugs and Dreams, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Aren't clouds wonderful? They give us so much to think about...to put us in our place, at times...depending on the season. Thank you Ethel. Your words are magic... I'm beginning to think you are kin to Enchantress and Nightshade!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is a sheer delight Ethel.......as are you!! hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This was so nice. Makes me think about floating on clouds and how carefree that makes me feel. Very nice, serene, peaceful feelings I got from this. Love, Terri~  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh, this is just gorgeous |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely lovely Ethel. Hugs. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was stunning, and the pic is one of which I'll be experiencing today...love being up there in the clouds. Are you a pilot? Anyway, Ethal, thanks a million for this beauty...very lovely. |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
beautiful verse, last stanza perfect closure.... Yes, she was in a place of space between awake and asleep The scenes before her eyes such fantasies she wanted to keep many thanks love Titch |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...I'm still f-l-o-a-t-i-n-g & d-r-i-f-t-i-n-g away.....  L-o-v-e-l-y!  Linda |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Yes, she was in a place of space between awake and asleep The scenes before her eyes such fantasies she wanted to keep" It is a good place to drift off from...  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Been there, I have.....glad to know you have too, and glad I stopped to read this pretty poem of it. Disneyland pretends to be the happiest place on earth, but we know better, don't we? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you made me feel I was drifting on a cotton candy cloud to a candy castle, yay! (kiss on cheek) May you and Gary always dream beautiful magic together, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
 If clouds could speak our tongue Many interesting things they would say And I could send a message over In case they were heading your way Beautiful verse Ethel. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Clouds are my favorite photography subject...thank you for sharing not only your image but your beautiful imagery as well. (I tried to paste my favorite cloud photo here...but, it didn't work...guess I have more "research" to do!) Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. [This message has been edited by jaicie114 (11-27-2003 01:24 AM).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read very much PoetFriend Garysgirl... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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