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My Words Speak Much About Me
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My Words Speak Much About Me |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I could try to pen a love song But such a talent I don't possess With my heart and soul I love you And of this love I now confess I could try to paint a picture But would not know quite where to start For no canvas would be big enough To show these feelings from my heart So I'll resort to written words To show how I really feel Your love means everything to me My heart is always yours to steal My words speak much about me As I expose my heart and soul If my words can make a difference Then I have achieved my goal I am in motion |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
that's such a beautiful poem Lil' Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful Sue! Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
That's beautiful, Sue. The cadence is perfect, and the words flow smoothly throughout. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Yes they do, Sue. Your words show how kindhearted you really are. And, you always write it so beautifully. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nicely written Dave |
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lovejunkie Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 93Indiana |
I really like the poem and the picture. nice choices. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always touch me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely written  |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sue: Your words do tell lots about you and it's a pleasure to know you! Also to read your lovely poems. Happy New Year. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Sue, you have a wonderful gift with words and expressing your soul. The only thing that disappoints me is that you are not writing 5 poems a day like you should be :-) I admire your work and thank you for bequesting your spirit within all of your writes. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is so beautiful. I love the way you write. It's always so uplifting. thank you.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - your words have achieved that goal... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"It's only words...and words are all I have...to take your heart away." The BeeGee's...James |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
sweet poem...lovely picture. McLEan |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Suetang, this would make the perfect Valentine's Day card. It's beautiful! |
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ambrya_nell Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 28Ohio |
how beautiful... an original way to express love. I really enjoyed this... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Sue Like iliana, I think this would make a wonderful Valentine messege..better than most I have seen at the Hallmark store... enjoyed this lovely, loving verse ________ice ><> |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue...Touching and tender words. Enjoyed very much. I agree with Ice about the valentine card...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so very much for your most humbling comments. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, and you do make a difference to every one of us, like you do to me for giving me hope true golden love still exists and I can find it in the world too, and you are an inspiration to all who want to crawl into other peoples shoes who are less fortunate and offer them heart hugs and love! (smiles) We are all so blessed to be your friends, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Let someone have that big heart Dave |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
That perfectly discribes the way I feel about someone right now. I believe I've found a well of inspiration in that one piece. |
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