Open Poetry #30 |
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Others Secret Inner Battles |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA ![]() |
On this path of life, when we meet someone by chance Circumstances in their life, we know not at first glance Some people tell lots of things, about present and past Still inside themselves, secrets just seem to last Situations too hard to speak of, deep inside their heart Even though they want them gone, they will not seem to part Some go to a counselor, or maybe even two Trying to release inner turmoils, wondering what to do No matter how many doctors or friends in whom they may confide The "thing" inside their heart, never seems to subside Putting on a happy face, feeling anguish and pain Thinking if they talk about it, what would be their gain In this coming year and all the years to come, too I will try to be always kind, and how about you Will you, my friend, do this simple thing I know if we will this do, each of our hearts will sing Knowing that we may have put a smile on anothers face Not adding more hurt to others, who have their secret place Plato said, "Be kind. For everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-29-2003 02:09 PM).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Wise advice, Ethel. I certainly hope 'Deer and Toe read this poem, as they have been too hard on me, and I have not deserved it at all! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Ethel, I love it when you write like this. Thank you for your gentle words of understanding. "Be kind. For everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" That is all too true, and so important to remember. Hugs Deary~ |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sailorman, I do hope that they treat you kinder this coming year. ![]() Maybe they will. LOL . . Lori, thank you so much. I really appreciate your sweet words. I'm glad that you liked it. ![]() . . Hugs to you both, ![]() Ethel |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Required reading..... Thank you Ethel, this started my day in the way every day should start. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well said, Ethel. Everyone has something they haven't shared with anyone... ![]() ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Ed. That's a very nice thing for you to say. I really appreciate it. ![]() . . Karilea, I must admit that since I've met Gary, he can tell when something is on my mind and bothering me. He is always concerned about me enough that he does try to persuade me to talk about things so I will quit worrying about them so much. And, yes, you have a lot of poetry stored in your heart, I'll bet. ![]() . . Hugs to both of you, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, A good piece of advice and a wonderful write. Happy New Year dear, ![]() |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sweet words, Lady... ![]() Hugs, and Love to you, Terri~ ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Seymour. I appreciate that. ![]() . . Thanks, Terri, and love to you too. ![]() . . Hugs to both of you, ![]() Ethel |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
i hold the same wishes for the one that hold secrets with me. well spoken |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You are smack dab on with this wonderful write Ethel. You just never know what is behind a person's smile or frown. Take time to get to know that person - you would want them to take a moment to get to know you. Hugs dear lady, Chris ![]() "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definite keeper! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martinia, thank you for reading and for your reply. I appreciate it. ![]() . . Chris, thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked it. I appreciate you, sweet lady. ![]() . . Hugs to both of you, ![]() Ethel |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Kind lady, you have written so well here... wonderful advice... beautiful poem! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel I think your heart must be made of pure gold. Happy new year! ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, sweet suthern lady!! :heart; . . Awwww Martie, thatis so sweet for you to say! Thank you and Happy New Year to you, too. . . With Love and Hugs to you both, ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, I just noticed that I missed you up that!! Sorry, sweet lady, and thank you!! With Love and Hugs, ![]() |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ah, yes, it is better to hope than give up trying to set out being kind. One person recently remarked that someone had given her something very special and since she didn't know who her benefactor was, she needed to be sure and be nice to everyone. Hmmm, is that the way we should approach our companions upon this plane. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
What a great poem. Thank you for sharing. You talk of a subject I'm sure we all know too well. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big angel hugs) That is my favorite quote Plato ever expressed and I believe we should always lend a hand to everyone in times of distress and cut them some slack and lift some of their loads for them! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
I can relate to this one. I've been a benevolent ear to everyone from a teen...to a teen's mother. PS- a toast*rasies glass* If life is to be a battle...then this for victory*bottoms up* |
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