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mfchild
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0 posted 2003-12-29 10:34 AM


No One


i traded my spiritual life
for one of reality
i gave up mental stimulation
for material expectations
footsteps in concrete
lay ahead of me
there is no changing destiny
and still conscience
misses u dearly

who knows the treasures of u
better than me? (no one, no one, no one)
who would trade their soul
just 2 make sure u had one?
(no one, no one, no one)

lyrics by: Paris Mark Toon 4 ButterScotch Blue publishing © www.mothersfavoritechild.com

© Copyright 2003 Paris Mark Toon - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-12-29 10:48 AM


interesting write
will you post the music with this here some day?
making your own music is in itself, a spiritual experience

iliana
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2 posted 2003-12-29 12:39 PM


Ditto the above comment and question, will you?
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-12-29 01:27 PM


I would also like to here the music
with some of your lyrics. Thank you
for sharing these with us.
Hugs,  
Ethel

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