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I Would the Feel
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I Would the Feel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I Would the Feel I wash my hands of paints illusion And hunger for the touch of sound Tired of those wrought delusions I would the face of real around. I would my hand to touch your skin Within the process of exist I would my heart to sigh within Without the mist of wanes desist I’m tired of the fantasy Rebel against the frozen mist I would the real of ecstasy Before I fall into the gist. I hold my head in weary wend And seek the shelter of a door I would no phantom be my end I would the glory and the gore My hand is out to feel that touch Without the aid of psyches crutch |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*touching the screen* amen, sy. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wash my hands of paints illusion And hunger for the touch of sound Tired of those wrought delusions I would the face of real around. I would my hand to touch your skin Within the process of exist I would my heart to sigh within Without the mist of wanes desist ------------------------- I hold my head in weary wend And seek the shelter of a door I would no phantom be my end I would the glory and the gore My hand is out to feel that touch Without the aid of psyches crutch ========================= *hand held out* oh my oh my oh sweet Sy ... OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!!!! those first two verses leave me moth weak in the knees. What a bittersweet beauty this is... Randy angst wrapped up in classic Sy couplets of oh so lovely poetic phrasing. Im gonna need a new wing added on to me Sy-babes library.  ~~~~~ If words but could they would ... would they, could they be enough? Would they say all need be said ... heart on sleeve, confessions off the cuff? If words but could they would ... could they speak a heart so true? Would they say the true intent ... would they define then do justice to you? If words but could they would ... could they overcome this distance? Would they precede the miles ... take the path of less resistance? If words but could touch across time and space ... so you would feel the love of this poetic embrace.  *winkiewinkie*    |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I cannot say more than the two poets above me... Thank you, Sy. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
When all the superlatives have been used.. may I just say 'thank you sir'...well done! Now...tea's brewing...shall I pour? ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, this certainly does reach out and touch us all. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Seymour! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity Thank you sweet Hugs. JM, Thank you for the poem love. I got something for you and will send it as soon as I can get to the post office.WWRS Sunshine Love ya Hugs Nancy, Be right there. scorpio, Thank you dear. SmartChick, Thanks for the beautiful. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Here I am teaching a poetry class ... sharing YOUR works with some mighty impressed students~ They see the word-master at work ... and are inspired~ You show them more by example ... than I can put into my own lesson plan~ THANK YOU~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ditto all the above -- you never disappoint me, Sey! ..........lol.........jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Flattery will get you everywhere. iliana, You are a doll. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wash my hands of paints illusion And hunger for the touch of sound Tired of those wrought delusions I would the face of real around. I would my hand to touch your skin Within the process of exist I would my heart to sigh within Without the mist of wanes desist ============================= *sigh* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I Would the Feel I wash my hands of paints illusion And hunger for the touch of sound Tired of those wrought delusions I would the face of real around. I would my hand to touch your skin Within the process of exist I would my heart to sigh within Without the mist of wanes desist LOL, Seymour, when I copied and pasted the above to quote the part that I related to the most, I didn't know that Janet Marie was quoting the same lines. LOL It is so true, though. Fantasy is good, but real is so much better!!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are my north star. Ethel, Yes Real is beter. |
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