Mystic moon.... treading in sky....

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ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

0 posted 2003-12-29 04:19 AM

Night is ripe but shy,
Desires are on a high,
Mystic moon treading in sky,
Drum beating somewhere afar.

The dance of flickering fire,
On melting ice,
Sparkles of desires,
Burning in eager eyes.

The fairies descending,
On earth from above,
As if for performing,
A grand show.

Their perfume lingers,
In atmosphere filling it with fragrance,
Bewitching and enchanting,
Everyone with their elegance.

The drums beating louder and louder,
Reaching to crescendo,
The hearts beating faster and faster,
Revealing their love incognito.

The romantic hearts,
Beating in unison,
Taking their desires,
Close to realisation.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-12-29 04:27 AM

Night is ripe but shy,
Desires are on a high,
Mystic moon treading in sky,
Drum beating somewhere afar.

The dance of flickering fire,
On melting ice,
Sparkles of desires,
Burning in eager eyes

Ambrish, this is a really pretty poem.

Hugs,
Ethel

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

2 posted 2003-12-29 12:44 PM

Oh, ambrish...

What an incredibly vivid write! Not only are your images wondrous...but, the way you led me to read faster and faster...whew! Thank you so much!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

3 posted 2003-12-29 01:32 PM

very nice !

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