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Open Poetry #30

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icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-12-29 12:50 PM

shadow's anodyne
watching love outlive its time
dark empty aching

©2003 by icebox

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2003-12-29 01:07 AM

Sometimes it does doesn't it?

Nicely written

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-29 01:26 AM

Yes, iceman, it does ache when
it has outlived its time.
Hugs to you,

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2003-12-29 02:01 AM

You have such a beautiful aching heart
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-12-29 05:36 AM

So deeply melancholic!
Beautifully rendered.
Love, Margherita

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2003-12-29 01:15 PM

icebox

For such a few simple words, this poem's meaning is complex. That's not easy to do. Enjoyed!

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

6 posted 2003-12-29 01:23 PM

It seems the pain is never really assuaged, though, doesn't it?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-12-30 12:10 PM

leaving me not sure what to say

but I was here

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2003-12-30 12:11 PM

good words... well presented

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

9 posted 2003-12-30 11:39 PM

And that anodyne does assuage part of the pain, but not nearly enough. Watching the loss, the fading, feeling it in the core of you....nothing stops that pain. Much expressed and much said with so few words.

~~J

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

10 posted 2003-12-30 11:57 PM

Nature desires
What else can impel
The self destruction

That oblivion
Allowing life
To continue
Destruction

To nature's rebirth

Dave

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