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jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-28 10:35 PM

The taste of you
still lingers
on my lips…

…your breath
in my breast.

I gently trace
my desire back…

to that flicker
of light
we call Creation…

to the time
we knew
we were One.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

lil' Angel
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

1 posted 2003-12-29 01:52 AM

Awesome poem

Lil' Angel

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

2 posted 2003-12-29 02:53 AM

very nice!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-12-29 02:57 AM

Very good poem, Jaicie.
I enjoyed reading it.

Hugs,

"Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry
http://community.webshots.com/user/toniasmom

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2003-12-29 03:08 AM

wow...so touching...perfect, I'm speechless...
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

5 posted 2003-12-29 03:25 AM

I gently trace
my desire back…

so imaginative and beautiful.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-12-29 05:42 AM

In the Source lies the truth.
Lovely!
Love, Margherita

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-12-29 08:20 AM

Wow Jc...!!!

Love,
Eric

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-12-29 08:24 AM

A tight true write, jaicie.

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

9 posted 2003-12-29 12:23 PM

Lil'Angel, wintertao, Ethel, Bella, ambrish, Margherita, Eric, Midnitesun...

Thank you all for your lovely comments. I wrote this one in the car a few days ago and then couldn't find it! Yikes...glad it surfaced!

And, I'm happy you enjoyed it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-12-29 07:04 PM

Lovely...lovely...lovely...can't tell you how many I've written in my car...drivers beware...James

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

11 posted 2003-12-29 07:07 PM

LOL James! Yeah...I can see it now...ummm, no officer, I'm not impaired...just writing a bit o' verse! LOL Glad you enjoyed!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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