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| Open Poetry #30 |
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Looking Into Your Eyes |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 ~**~ I love to look into your eyes for I always see your love for me there No matter what may happen in life you and your love make it easier to bear When looking into your loving eyes seeing within your inner being The deep love and devotion shines through your love and feelings I am seeing A persons eyes always tell the truth they show all that is real So as I gaze deep into yours I love what your eyes to me reveal ~**~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-02-2004 10:51 AM).] |
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j_123321 New Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 7 |
This is extremely well written with the rhyming techniqueproving useful to potray your emotions. Personally, I always find poems that rhyme more clever and easier to 1) enjoy 2) relate to. Finally, I'm very glad that you found someone who makes you feel so secure and who you know really loves you. If only evryone was as lucky! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ethel, you are the mirrors of love to each other. This is so tender and lovely. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes ethel, it is always in the eyes , hard to miss |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is the way it should be...forever and always. Just beautiful, Ethel! Patricia |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep - - - definitely the way it should always be. jwesley |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Ethel - you write of love so wonderfully - a great love song - Paul |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ohhhhh, Ethel, this was really beautiful! lol.......jo |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile i always said that if you want to see true love look into a kids eyes, hmmmm with what i read here, i can only say there must be two kids grown that kept there loving trusting, shining eyes of love. Smile i enjoyed. Jes |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
So as I gaze deep into yours I love what your eyes to me reveal so beautiful. |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
so sweet...that is how love should be. Beautifully done. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
**Sigh** ...lovely......  |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
This is sooooo beautiful, Ethel...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful Ethel. All the best to you and Gary in 2004! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
yeah what she said up there above me  RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
j_ Margherita, Michele Patricia Jimmy Paul iliana Jes Ambrish Bella Terri jc Nancy Lee Snowflake I can't express how very much I appreciate you all and thank each of your for your nice replies. I'm glad that you all liked my poem.  Hugs to each of you,  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this made my eyes feel all watery and sheepish, hehehe! (kiss on cheek) I know just how you feel as my eyes feel soft when seeing others feeling happy and wishing you and everyone true happiness always, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
I'm a sucker for love poems :-\. I like it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Whitney Houston once wrote,,,,"It's in his kiss." Sorry, but, I have to agree with you,,,,,the eyes tell it all,,,even as simple as a glance,,,to a soul burning stare,,,,, good write Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When looking into your loving eyes seeing within your inner being The deep love and devotion shines through your love and feelings I am seeing Yes... *S* And there's no sight more beautiful. *S* This is just lovely... *S* |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ethel Your love shines brightly throughout this heartfelt piece of writing. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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