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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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A restless spirit rises within the morning mist, memories crashing upon the waiting shore, tearing up the once-firm foundations of the edge of my world. Nevermore. Nevermore to caress the face, wet the lips in wait of you, kick the sand joyfully in anticipation. You won’t be coming back. What was it we talked about for hours on end? What were we laughing about that last day that made me smile even as you sailed away waving a "See ya." Nevermore was not even in my vocabulary, until today. |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
I could feel the somber undertones to this fine piece. Nice work! Love, Bonnie |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Poignant....very well done Kacy... the trials, tribulations and feelings of See Ya. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wow...very powerful. I enjoyed this muchly! Take care, Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!! Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Kacy, this is very well done! A simple "see ya" can open to the abyss! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really, really liked this one -- especially the second stanza. Beautifully written. ........lol |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A restless spirit rises within the morning mist, memories crashing upon the waiting shore, tearing up the once-firm foundations of the edge of my world. Nevermore. Oh pout!! That's not good! I wish your heart didn't ache this way. Hugs Kacy~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that nevermore stings, just no way to soften it, well done kacy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this just aches Kacy. Wonderfully written. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ This touches such a tender place within my heart~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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