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Open Poetry #30

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iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

0 posted 2003-12-27 10:41 PM

Suppose
     grasses grew high thru asphalt cracks;
Would my memory haunt the tomb
     after a thousand years had lapsed
     with these words spoken silently
     or with your tunes?

While yet today, our moon silently drifts
     over selfish ruins (spoils of tomorrow),
No one hears the beauty it writes --
     life lines written in nite --
     each day harder to read because Earth's worth diminishes.

In black sky, starfire paths (a million lights away)
     twinkle mystery,
     beckon hope.
As I stare intensely, dense vastness overwhelms.
Thoughts focus on summit points,
     hyponotic spectrums followed.

Tomorrow . . . . just another day;
     but forever, Night is wholly hallowed.

Iliana

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2003-12-27 10:53 PM

hello, iliana!
It's good to read your posts once again. I hope you had a merry Christmas. My writing is at its worst. Can you believe I misspelled banjo/bango and neither of us caught it! I had to write an acrostic piece on humility for this reason!
Sadelite

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-27-2003 10:57 PM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2003-12-27 11:06 PM

Thanks for the post. Nice Christmas here. All is quiet now. BEEEEwell!

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

3 posted 2003-12-28 12:14 PM

you ahve done it again.
I LOVE yer poems!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-12-28 12:17 PM

What a wonderful, creative write!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2003-12-28 12:21 PM

C? -- thank you so much for reading them, it really means a lot to me. Happy New Year!

Midnitesun -- likewise -- and thanks very much! Happy New Year!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-01-01 11:21 PM

Midnitesun -- thank you so much!

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