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Open Poetry #30

A touch so soft

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-12-27 06:17 PM

So wise she seems
in endless dreams
her wisdom speaks
of empty things

so sweet her touch
a feathers' brush
seductive are
her eyes, as such

and fingertips
will light the way
soft kiss, and brush
we fade away

and empty prayers
are nothing gained
so empty were
the thoughts so stained

a touch so soft
It burned like rain
A whispered touch
that felt like pain

A whisper fell
a hush to feel
A silence fell
silence to seal

a promise made
a lie made real
will never make
a lover feel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-12-27 06:22 PM

Jason, this is such a beautiful love poem,
but I felt a sadness in it. I hope all
is well with you and yours.

Very beautiful writing, my friend.

Hugs,

Ethel

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-12-27 06:26 PM

Soft and fragile, as the touch of love.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2003-12-27 06:34 PM

Very good words

Dave

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2003-12-27 06:55 PM

Read it again

The words are very good

Dave

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-12-28 01:01 AM

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2003-12-28 01:10 PM

jason,

very poignant write...you captured
the emotion so well...a hint of sadness
to this, but I think that is exactly
how you meant it

take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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