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Challenge #2 - Larry's challenge
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Challenge #2 - Larry's challenge |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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If I could meet a star - challenge 2 If I could meet a star, I simply could choose Balladeer That greyish man, that scalawag, well known to you all here But he is hiding all the time, cooking up some stories new He's reciting them by heart and when I heard, mine skipped a few If I could meet a star, I simply could choose Duncan boy That puppy on the porch that gave us so much joy With simple words he says a lot, he touched my heart each time But he is probably busy, writing another heartbeat rhyme If I could meet a star, I simply could choose Queen of rhyme Elizabeth, that lady dear, who's giving us an awfull good time Who speaks from heart and even soul about the forest she adores Who leaves the key in her closed car and didn't wake up from my snores If I could meet a star, I simply could choose Marge, that dear But then I'd better emigrate, because she'd hold me there I fear And when your luggage is too heavy, just ask 'cause she is great In getting men to help you see, I know of one who took the bait If I could meet a star, I would choose one from Passions blue Because they are all stars to me, above I named only a few When I would write about you all it would just take me till next year And it would blow Ron's server up and you'll blame me for that I fear What makes a star? I wouldn't know, unless it is the fame you see But that is only outer sparkles, a star shines from within for me Even those who dare not shine, are stars that play their part If I could meet a star, I simply look at you and close you in my heart Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (12-27-2003 03:35 PM).] |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I am sorry but after the first verse I skip do the end of the verse, and then I skipped to the end. I write torteous prose but I dont understand why a Lady of your quality is doing the same. Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Titia, this is so lovely! And the end is perfect: What makes a star? I wouldn't know, unless it is the fame you see But that is only outer sparkles, a star shines from within for me Even those who dare not shine, are stars that play their part If I could meet a star, I simply look at you and close you in my heart Love, Margherita  |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
this is really cool and some creative humor mixed in there, sweet! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hello Dave, being new here I can understand you misunderstood my poem. Watch your email, I'll explain. Just know that I love those people to pieces, they're my bestest friends. Margherita, thanks dear, you got that right about the end. Wintertao, thanks, we always like to tease each other Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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