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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-12-26 07:51 AM


Receive and Believe

If words a symbol of believe
An understanding of receive
Then I am but a middle ground
Of the flower of profound

They grow in light of our discern
In the soil of what we learn
And hence the process ever new
And ever in the form of coup

They are a part of rivers flow
Begin and end in what we know
And offers us a sip of tea
From out the omni of the sea

In other words there is no stable
And all we say a partial fable
The incubate is in the pour
In the score of evermore

Eternity is but a brew
Of phases that we all go through

© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Steve Motuel
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1 posted 2003-12-26 08:08 AM


a lovely poem with great rhyme
and
"Eternity is but a brew
Of phases that we all go through"

so true...

Steve

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2 posted 2003-12-26 10:23 AM


Morning Sy!
Just had to pop in and read your pearls of wisdom this day after Christmas.
Hope you and yours enjoyed a wonderful day yesterday.
~Smiles,hugs and tea, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...    

iliana
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3 posted 2003-12-26 11:06 AM


Good morning there, Sey!  Not going to stay here long this morning but at least had to read this one.  Intereeeesssssting and thought provoking!    lol
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4 posted 2003-12-26 11:18 AM



We do tend to forget
that we are all in the same stew...
interesting read
from a somewhat magical brew!

~*~

Good morning Sy!

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5 posted 2003-12-26 11:30 AM


This is beautiful lyrical!

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-12-26 11:41 AM


Steve  
Thank you I enjoyed your reply.

Nancy,
Thank you sweet, had a wonderful day.

iliana
Enjoyed your reply, have a good one.

Sunshine
Good morning love.

Eric,
Thank you sweet,

Jes
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7 posted 2003-12-26 01:14 PM


Smile

A pleasure to read ya poems Seymour.

Smile

Jes


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-12-26 01:51 PM


Jes,
A pleasure to read your reply.

BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2003-12-26 02:21 PM


If words a symbol of believe
An understanding of receive
Then I am but a middle ground
Of the flower of profound

Oh boy,  you sure do say it awful nice, Sy~  


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-12-26 02:30 PM


BluesSerenade,
Thank you sweetie it's nice to read.

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11 posted 2003-12-26 06:09 PM


Oh, how lovely Seymour. It is evening.....I know, I know. But, I am here with hot apple pie & vanilla icecream!   Enchantress put that kettle back on. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

ethome
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12 posted 2003-12-26 06:11 PM


Whoa! Love those last two lines Sy

Like it all real well esp the title.....But those last two lines are great!

Eric

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13 posted 2003-12-26 08:54 PM


If words a symbol of believe
An understanding of receive
Then I am but a middle ground
Of the flower of profound

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Sy-babes, youre not just the middle...youre the beginning and end of poetic profundity.

The moth is late again...
We're gonna have to change me name from Tink to Tardy if I keep this up.

I'm running between 2 houses, taking care of 2 with the flu...but I still have some winkies left for you.


Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-12-26 09:44 PM


Chris,
You are a sweetie pie.

ethome
Wonderful comment, thank you.

Dear Tardy Tink,
Winkiewinkie this is stinky and I hope you are not stretching yourself out to far.
You do worry me at times.
WWRS

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15 posted 2003-12-27 04:58 AM


another daily shot of Seymour...I am late tonight but better late than never
Patricia
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16 posted 2003-12-27 09:51 AM


Excellent!  You always make me think...and see life a bit differently...thanks for allowing me a glimpse through your eyes.

Patricia

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-12-27 10:54 AM


passing  
Always,

Patricia
I thank you for the reply,

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18 posted 2003-12-27 11:54 AM


Eternity is but a brew
Of phases that we all go through



Well, Seymour, I was busy yesterday and wasn't
here much.....so I missed this one. Glad that I didn't miss it today.
Hugs  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2003-12-27 04:34 PM


Ethel,
Thank you sweetie for the read and sweet comment.

Aimster
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20 posted 2003-12-27 04:37 PM


sy,

hello mr king of cool
how did you get so smart
loved this!

take care,
amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-12-27 04:43 PM


amy,
Why talking with the likes of you.

vandana
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22 posted 2003-12-27 06:44 PM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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23 posted 2003-12-27 09:00 PM


Thank you vandana.

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