Open Poetry #30 |
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A Day |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sweet dreams Whisper Long passions Walks Hills Sweeping passion images Calling Windswept trees To a torpid day Drifting Long grass Sublime pleasure Spinning wood inspired Fragrant desire Of peace To a small pond milling in a lake Fishing For compliments From busy ducks Fishing To complement Their passion In a day When all else is lost |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The sound of a passionate day has reached me. Beautiful. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I liked it! I would suggest you change around your formatting some...don't always cap the first letter of every line...play around with dif formatting types. |
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