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Ratleader
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0 posted 2003-12-24 11:08 AM



Another subduction
in the batholith....

So? This is California,
that stuff happens
all the time.

Open up and
swallow me next time,
you might like it;

Better yet, try to keep
that little temblor of yours
in your pocket...

© Copyright 2003 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-12-24 11:23 AM


Ratleader
Cute, enjoyed.

Martie
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2 posted 2003-12-24 11:35 AM


Ed...I was very glad NOT to have felt this one!  
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3 posted 2003-12-24 11:46 AM


Ed's feeling like a wiseguy this morning, Christmas shopping finally done and nothing more constructive to think about than those slippy-slidey tectonic plates rubbing against each other down in the dark.....

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4 posted 2003-12-24 12:32 PM


neat write
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5 posted 2003-12-24 12:36 PM


Well done Ed.
Have a very Merry Christmas.
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

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6 posted 2003-12-24 04:11 PM


ROFL... What wonderful in-your-face defiance! *S* I'm so glad you're okay... *S*
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7 posted 2003-12-24 04:34 PM


uh...so, did you do any shake and bake for the holidays?

*grin*

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8 posted 2003-12-24 05:25 PM


wowsa a creative masterpiece I and I would say
Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2003-12-25 08:24 AM


I enjoyed the way you captured this, Ed!  I hope the earth is still and silent for a wonderful Christmas morning. Merry Christmas to you!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2003-12-25 04:55 PM


Ed~
Merriest Holiday to you and yours~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

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11 posted 2003-12-26 04:52 PM


lots of well done humor here Ed - loved it - Paul
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12 posted 2003-12-26 06:22 PM


Happy Holidays.....neat little write hugssss

~~**~~**~~**~~**~~
May the miracle of
Christmas touch your
life with special blessing

H A P P Y  H O L I D A Y S

BluesSerenade
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13 posted 2003-12-28 09:17 PM


Oh, so that's a temblor in your pocket??
I had to go look it up you know.  
  

Good message,  my fellow Californian...
Hey, I bet Arnold could use this!  

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14 posted 2003-12-28 11:15 PM


A great note indeed, hope San Andreas takes er note

How is Arnie doing btw?

Enjoyed Ed

M.

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


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15 posted 2003-12-29 01:59 AM


Enjoyed~Happy New Year!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

harash
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16 posted 2003-12-29 02:05 AM


A lovely write..
iliana
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17 posted 2003-12-29 02:54 AM


Rough morning, huh?  Still, you have a way of making yourself and others laugh with you.  lol and Happy New Year!
dingusjr
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18 posted 2003-12-29 10:15 AM


Hey...quit picking on San Andreas....
It's not his fault!         Larry

Hockeychick19
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19 posted 2003-12-29 10:30 AM


Ed,

This is a great write. I'm glad I don't live in California because something like that would really freak me out.

Hugs,
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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