Open Poetry #30 |
Knowing and Seeing |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
John 3 v11: Verily, verily, I say unto thee, We speak that we do know, and testify that we have seen; and ye receive not our witness. Hear the babe crying, Waking from the womb, I pause to ponder the worth Of the tears shed at the birth, Now it starts dying And heads for the tomb, Through all the pain and the fears If it be days, weeks or years, Death is the destination. I tell what I know Seen in the places I go, Bits of light in gloom; Reality bleak That some in death seek Final emancipation. What do you offer? Occasional coin in coffer, Sit silent in pew Is that the best you can do? Can you not find cause Share some goodness you keep, Will you look around Find the time to make a pause And fix the broken things found, Give by the doing, What difference can you reap, Hear the babe cooing From more than two thousand years Gloom |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I'm taken by this reminder. Pause |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Will you look around Find the time to make a pause And fix the broken things found, Give by the doing, (I should be an angel by now...) j/k liked your wordings this day Happy Holiday Hugs, PG |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Dearest Gloomy One, As always your words move me. I love the way you think, mister. Susan "if you won't let me fall for you then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you" ~Dido~ [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (12-24-2003 11:45 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Thanks for the reminder. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well said Gloom...well said! ~Mistletoe hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
truly beautiful ............ be well this holiday season and enjoy your loved ones! ........ a friend |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sit silent in pew Is that the best you can do? Can you not find cause Share some goodness you keep, Will you look around Find the time to make a pause And fix the broken things found, Give by the doing, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ beautiful words.... : ) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You gave me cause to reflect. Well done believe in what your heart feels... |
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