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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-12-24 06:28 AM

Maybe we're finally connected..
on the same level, deafened to the same tone.
Can you hear
my ears
ringing?
This rage was clear.

Must I explain the depths of my
            insanity,
the wilting of my pride..
the blooming of my
        seclusion?
Here planted, and huddled
in the rain.

Must I..

Breathe in such spirals,
walk such redundant roads and
bear myself no witness
to my own extermination?

These words have cut
me deeply..the shapes of my
inability to understand..

the philosophy of a flower entombed,
the crucifixion
of petrified song..
the wind once
     belonged to me..
for moments I gathered
the grace of escape.. here, I whispered your
     name..

boundless echos 'cross the sea..
This time,
    I will ride along
the same
           wavelength.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-12-24 01:02 PM

I don't think you or I could explain the depths of our insanity if we had to Meg

this write is a really neat perspective on wavelength

I enjoyed the depth

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-12-24 03:52 PM

the depths of ones insanity can be so beautiful when someone understands
this is so so good as ive come to expect by now from you
enjoy the holidays

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2004-01-18 11:01 AM

The answers are, yes, and yes, and yes, and yes. And the hope is that you will.

You have an excellent voice, one that pulls me into your writing, and keeps me there.

~~J

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-01-18 01:04 PM

bump

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-01-18 01:15 PM

Once again....wow...!!!!

Eric

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-01-18 03:28 PM

Kaoru -- is it insanity to be real?! You are a terrific writer!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-01-18 03:30 PM

Fantastic write!!

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

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