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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-12-24 12:17 PM

Do not disturb, lay still my love
quietly in my arms my love~

Rise with me in the morning sun
come to me, by the sea my love~

Meet me at the horizons edge
sail away in dreams my love~

Draw me in transparent hues
color me in endless blue~

Slip beneath the waters edge
rolling over the highest crest~

Serenade me in the twilight hours
moonlighting by the sea my love~

Watch the sun set brazenly
sleep by my side, 'til sunrise~

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2003-12-24 12:20 PM

very nice,,,,,ive felt that perfect spot,,,,when you feel your loves heart beat near yours,,,,,and dont want to lose it by moving,,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2003-12-24 12:22 PM

Hi ya Bluesy! This one has a very rhythmic and musical feel to it. I especially liked:

"Meet me at the horizons edge
sail away in dreams my love~

Draw me in transparent hues
color me in endless blue~"

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-12-24 01:33 AM

You say things like this and expect not to be disturbed???

Sounds like a recipe for disturbance to me!

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-12-24 04:31 AM

this is the one thing I have trouble with...sleeping and waking up with someone.

It's a nice thought though....maybe one day

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-12-24 04:34 AM

Lori, this is a very loving poem.
I enjoyed reading it.

Hugs,
Ethel

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-12-24 06:21 AM

WOO! I love it

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2003-12-24 10:22 AM

Hey blues...enjoyed this!

"Serenade me in the twilight hours". . .
can't imagine You not being serenaded Twenty-Four hours a day...my friend.

jwesley

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2003-12-24 01:05 PM

Wonderful music!
Great rhythm.
Love and hugs. Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-12-24 03:50 PM

so soft and romantic and slipping off in the land of love in the undertow,
please can i come along?
have a happy, girlie girl

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

10 posted 2003-12-24 04:38 PM

Best offer I have had in years!

Huh?

What?

..uh...oh...you didn't mean me...OK, never mind.

Have a nice night anyway.

*smile*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-12-24 05:27 PM

Hey! I just went on a cruise
that sounded a whole lot like that!

Merry Christmas, m'dear!

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

12 posted 2004-01-07 10:28 PM

Do I disturb you, out bumping poetry tonight?

~~J

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2004-01-07 10:50 PM

Did you disturb me?? Say what??
Read the sign James....

This is down right EMBARRASSING!
Oh how will I ever save face??

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