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jaicie114
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-23 09:54 PM


I listen to you breathe...

And,
I know
that my destiny

Wafts on
that sweet whisper.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2003 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2003-12-23 10:17 PM


Ah, such sweet destiny, my friend...love the way you showed it.


jwesley

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-12-23 10:21 PM


Wonderful write!
Thanks for the smiles.
TD

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
3 posted 2003-12-23 10:33 PM


Ahh...jwesley and TD...thank you for your gracious replies!  I truly appreciate them.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-12-23 11:35 PM


Beautiful!
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

iliana
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5 posted 2003-12-23 11:36 PM


jaicie114 -- jwesley beat me to the punch with his/her post to you.  Enjoyed!
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-12-24 05:05 AM


ooooo, short, sweet and powerful
Margherita
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7 posted 2003-12-24 01:07 PM


And it is a destiny of love ...
Sweet write, dear jaicie, beautiful in its essence.
Love and light. Margherita

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
8 posted 2003-12-24 03:26 PM


Terri, Iliana, Dixie, and Margherita...

Yeah...I keep hanging around Eric and I keep getting briefer with my words! Oy vey! Don't know if the Universe can handle a succinct "jc"...but, we'll just go with the flow for awhile! LOL  I'm glad you liked it...thank you for your comments.

Love and Light...jc


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (12-24-2003 03:27 PM).]

Ericc
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9 posted 2003-12-26 11:40 AM


And only a heart opened to the world of love could hear such delicate whispers...beautiful Jc!

Love,
Eric

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2003-12-26 11:57 AM


Jaicie~

Beautiful brevity ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
11 posted 2003-12-26 02:22 PM



What a delightful read!

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
12 posted 2003-12-26 07:12 PM


Eric, thank you for your comments and your help in opening this heart.

Marge and Sunshine...thank you so much for your replies...I sincerely appreciate them.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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