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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
It's only the breath. Passing warm across the ear. The secret goes unnoticed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Good one, enjoyed. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hmmmmm im currios want to hear about taht secret. Smile enjoyed, and happy holidays Jes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Eric.. Have a wonderful holiday!  |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Mmmmmmmmmmmm... with you whispering in someone's ear...there is no earthly way it would go unnoticed! How do you always write such magic? Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, but me thinks the ear it touches will always know... nicely done, jwesley |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awww...pssst...(this was so sweet!)  Terri~  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ericc ---- ahhhhhh -- is there a double meaning here? I liked it the first time I read it but then began to think about this and I liked it even more. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Brilliant! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Well done! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very nice....as soft an quiet as a kept secret....:-) "We dance round in a ring and suppose, But the Secret sits in the middle and knows." -- Robert Frost _______ice ><> |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The secret loves to play across our ears. It smiles right into our eyes but dissolves just an instant before we capture it. It's in every breath and it reveals itself only in special moments of grace .... huuuuuuuuuuu .... I love you, Poet of magic. Margherita |
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