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Open Poetry #30

An Old Fashion Love Story

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2003-12-23 11:41 AM

Another beautiful sunset,
Against a mountain view,
Beauty uncomparable,
Romance shared by two.

It wasn't their first encounter,
They'd loved so much before,
Each time better than the last,
Who could ask for more?

Their bodies entertwined,
Now "one" in love together,
As the sun went down in color,
A partnership forever.

Their commitments sealed with promise,
A love now never ending,
A honeymoon in Paris
Their passions just beginning.

It's such a touching love song,
One that brings a tear,
Nothing will come between them
LONGJOHN AND BALLADEER.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-12-23 11:46 AM

Toe,
"LONGJOHN" OR "BALLADEER." You sure you're OK.
LOL

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-12-23 11:50 AM

Toe...ya just had to go and monkey with the ending!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-12-23 11:51 AM

Toe, Ho! Ho! Ho!

By gosh, that was one of the most beautiful love poems ~ and your metre was impeccable. Yes, the ending gave me a chuckle and a half, but seriously, as a poem of pure and soul-touching romance, it stood all on it's own!