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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
I listen to the breeze… whispering words of love, so softly… that only my soul can hear. It bears the tidings of Truth, so gently… as if borne on eiderdown or sunshine. It is a tale of desire… A story of creation… It is the love song your soul breathes into mine across the expanse of eternity. I answer, “Yes, My Beloved… Oh, yes!” This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jaicie114 Just lovely. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Softly love whispers upon a breeze Beautifully expressed Hope |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely write, Jaicie... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jaicie, this is a beautiful love poem. I enjoyed reading it.  Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are good at the love stuff  |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Seymour, Hope, Sunshine, Ethel...thank you so much for your replies. I'm truly glad you enjoyed this. Dixie...yeah, girl...you'd actually think I know what I'm talkin' about here, wouldn't you? LOL Thanks for the read! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You listen with the heart Jc...as only a true poet does. Love, Eric |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
" I listen to the breeze… whispering words of love, so softly… that only my soul can hear. " The touch that is comming with the breeze, just to let the heart ease. Smile enjoyed Jes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very nice Jaicie  enjoyed. "I can't believe |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dear Eric...I'm learning to listen from the best! Thank you! Jes and Dark Angel...thank you for your replies...I sincerely appreciate your kind comments. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful . . . especially liked the first stanza.... jwesley |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Thank you, jwesley... Isn't it interesting how so many of us are writing about the breath and whispers and such? I appreciate your nice comments...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It is a tale of desire… A story of creation… Beautiful, you are deeply inspired. Love and light. Margherita |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dearest Margherita... Such a lovely comment coming from you makes my heart sing...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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