Open Poetry #30 |
Only In My Dreams |
Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Will I ever get to see you, Will I ever get to touch you, Maybe someday, But for now only in my dreams. How do your kisses taste, How will your skin feel against mine, I want you to make me feel wonderful, Make me shine, You can’t right now, Only in my dreams. My heart is wide open, Without hesitation, Ready to receive your love, For real, And in my dreams. Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
sweet! very nice |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I liked the title of this and the way you carried it through... Enjoyed. Sadelite |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Wintertao - I'm glad you like it. Sadelite - I'm glad you enjoyed it... I write from my heart, I believe it's the best way. Thanks for replying ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful write...very soft, and your heart shows wonderfully! I hope all your dreams come true. Happy Holidays, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Amy, I'm glad you liked it. I also hope everything works out in my favor. Thanks for stopping by. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
First we dream...and then we know. It's a magic and magical formula. Beautiful words and dream. Eric |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
When hearts do trust.... The dreams come through. So there ya go. Smiles Jes |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Eric - I hope that the formula works to make it really happen somday. Thanks for replying. Jes - You are so very right... I just hope my dreams come true sooner rather than later. Thanks for stoppin by. Hugs, ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have lots of dreams like this...reminds me of the song "In Dreams"...by Roy Orbison...James |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Vandana - I'm glad you liked it... Thanks for replying. James - I don't think I've heard that song, probably because I'm too young. (I'm only 20). Thanks for stopping by. Hugs, ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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