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Open Poetry #30

we walked so slowly

borgeN
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 9
Norway

0 posted 2003-12-22 07:23 PM

we walked so slowly that day
they carried grandpa up and through the gate
I could play on, and the ocean behind the church and the sky
were so grey, and daddy talked so gently that I could bearly hear him,
and the rain and the wind and mummy were so angry,
and I didn’t understand why I wanted to cry

[This message has been edited by borgeN (12-22-2003 07:24 PM).]

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

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My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2003-12-22 07:25 PM

sad...nicely written though

RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB-

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-12-22 07:53 PM

borgeN
Good write, enjoyed the read.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

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Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2003-12-22 08:34 PM

borgeN,

Wonderful expression here. Welcome to Passions.

LW

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS

Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2003-12-22 08:35 PM

sorry the page had to reload and this one posted twice.

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (12-22-2003 08:35 PM).]

borgeN
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 9
Norway

5 posted 2003-12-23 07:18 AM

thank you all

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