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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I will call to the wind that makes a mountain fair I will see my thoughts echo I see you standing there Storms above challenge my regard Dancing on my soul Raining through the shard I call to the wind Explosive as it flows Carry my wish As far as you can go When all else is lost |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
how far can a wish go? as far as the mind can hear,,,,,good job Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautifully written.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
"Dancing on my soul" ... wd, good write. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey Dave Your words were as smooth as silk and so beautifully written. "Love is the poetry of the senses" Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This one really flows, Dave. Thanks for sharing. "When your life is tossed and turning |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Dave, Your words paint a beautiful picture... Great job. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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