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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2003-12-21 03:43 PM



I thought i'd lost you
as the turnaround moon
dwindled from the window's view,

as the rainbow subdued,

as the tail of the renegade cloud
was pursued,

I thought i'd lost you,

until recyclying hues
formed the setting sun coming thru,

making this moment now gifted by you,

while i'm shackled and earthbound

to this stuck
window view


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-22-2003 06:52 AM).]

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Magnus
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1 posted 2003-12-21 04:19 PM


This deserves to be read...it is very nice.
Much enjoyed.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-12-21 04:35 PM


How very beautiful, dear poetess!
The words glow.
Love and light. Margherita

bklynboy
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florida
3 posted 2003-12-22 06:50 AM


what can i say....another well done!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-12-22 06:55 AM


*s...nice thoughts, Michele.

M

Kahlil
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5 posted 2003-12-22 09:24 AM


I love how you word things...  ~K~
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-12-22 09:26 AM


Wonderful piece here Michael.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Let peace begin with me...    

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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7 posted 2003-12-22 09:27 AM


Very well said and written, my friend.

jwesley

PassionandFun
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8 posted 2003-12-23 12:25 PM


a little rhyming here and there is a nice change of pace...well done
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-12-23 02:52 AM


renegade clouds...hmmm...

what a thought

the write is excellent!

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2003-12-23 06:53 AM


thanks for reading guys and dolls
vandana
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11 posted 2003-12-23 06:47 PM


enjoyed
iliana
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12 posted 2003-12-23 11:24 PM


Really beautiful writing here.  I really enjoyed it!  Hope you are enjoying the holidays!
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
13 posted 2003-12-25 12:47 PM


Merry Christmas Kiddo.
TD

bklynboy
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florida
14 posted 2004-01-18 07:52 PM


thought this needed to be read again!
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