Open Poetry #30 |
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Frolics The Happy Heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
*~* From top to bottom white veneer Joy beats within your thought kept near To bring my smile from inside out Erase the waif of chronic doubt The strangest romance ever known Takes on a life that’s all its own Behind the fort you seem to hide While I contort to peek inside And catch you looking to the East Yet I am West of you at least This moment comes just once, but then The snow provides the greet I send My love surprise, sent from the blind Turned curve and over here to find Each moment’s glee beside you still Sent fast, a gasp of snow ball thrill That seems eternal to be close Some fun and frolic each in dose To lift the edges smiles reveal I place a chill in sweet conceal A Christmas wish in snowy globe Beneath the Northern lights to strobe Upon your secret wishes fall Love notes that will not melt at all Copyright Kkh 12/21/03 |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, isn't the fun and frolic of romance fun? LOL Hugs, ![]() |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
A Happy Season to you Kathleen and may those heartfelt thoughts never fade ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Well you have a diamond here. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
love notes that will not melt at all....... oh that snow's first kiss, if only to keep it, but then it wouldnt be so beautiful afterall |
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littlme26 New Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 6nc |
this was a precious poem. love the flow ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful and fun mixed with loving...makes a smile here! Thanks, TD! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A beautiful and touching holiday gift...thank you. Eric |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And I thought I was the only one that craved snowballs? Seems you have much more ammo up north than us Southerners might ever see. Nicely written K. This should elicit a smile or two.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great write, so full of wonderful lines and images. Love and light. Margherita |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
Amidst all love's tragedy we are suddenly reminded of the fun. You put a smile on my face, ThisDiamond, And you reminded me of what damn good writing can look like. Thanks, for the memory... Tony. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooo! I liked this! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A Christmas wish in snowy globe Beneath the Northern lights to strobe Upon your secret wishes fall Love notes that will not melt at all perfect... *s M |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I enjoyed this happy, loving write. Happy Holidays! ~K~ |
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