Open Poetry #30 |
Loves Embrace |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Loves Embrace I wrapped myself in loves embrace A shawl of lace, the rose your face Climbed a stairway to the moon All in a summers afternoon Wondered in a field of green Knelt to you within the scene Whispered notes of tenderness Flowers of your loveliness Covered you with faille of trace Fitted them with gales of grace Offered you my heart in store Dipped in lover’s magic awe. Drew you near with phantoms tale Where ecstasy composed the trail Lit a lamp of never die To light each step upon its lie An Islands archipelago Sixty some odd years ago |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
so touching,,,,,you can feel the scene,,,very awsum I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sigh....h |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
So romantic a write. Beautifully crafted. Sy, your words evoked memories of a wonderful afternoon spent last summer. Thank you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're such a sweetheart... no wonder Isabelle won't let go! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Awwww... What sweet sentiment, the gentle grow and share of time. Loved this Sy... Merry Christmas. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
To have a love such as you and yours share is incredibly rare Sy. Over sixty years....oh wow! Wonderful morning write. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, you know that being the hopeless romantic that I am, I loved this beautiful love poem this morning. Thank you for sharing your love with us. Hugs to you and yours, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michelle, Thank you so much. 1slick_lady Thank you dear. scorpio, To evoke is good. Sunshine, And you are a love. Nancy, Be right over for tea. ThisDiamond, Thank you sweet. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thank you love. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
A pleasant read this holiday season..best of seasons to you and yours Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan I thank you my friend and the same to you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, T-Man! Thank you for Sy Guy sigh! ~ lovely, warm memories... The kind that when revisited, are as fresh and as vivid as when they were being made. Lovely poem from a lovely man, Warm holiday huggums & blessings, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Love the huggums, |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Well done Seymour. Love it! But then you knew I would. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EvocativeVerse2 Thank you sweet. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...You are such a lovely man! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie And you are such a lovely girl. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such are our memories, of times that never die within us... Thanx for the pleasure of sharing this with us... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Seymour dear, these memories are so beautiful and you express them in such a masterful way, you share the emotions so intensely that they seem born in the NOW. Your heart knows. Love and light. Margherita |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely imagery, Sey. Core |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus Thank you Barry Margherita A lovely comment, thank you dear. Core, Thank you sweet. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Well this has to be the favorite one for me! enjoyed sharing your memories! ~ARH |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Romantic Heart Thank you for the read and bump. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How beautiful are both your words and your loving heart. *S* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sy, beautiful write! as always you amaze... happy holidays! Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Amy, You are a sweetheart. squeeze: |
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