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Open Poetry #30

Snowstorm

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-12-21 04:32 AM

The forecast said the storm was only starting.
There was snow without an end in sight,
As if, in the middle of a slumber party,
All the angels gathered for a pillow fight...

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (12-21-2003 04:46 AM).]

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

1 posted 2003-12-21 05:30 AM

Wow!
Your words just hit me, really well written.

Hugs, kelly

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

2 posted 2003-12-21 06:21 AM

Well put words, were you can see the angels make that pillow fight.

Smile

Jes

borgeN
New Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 9
Norway

3 posted 2003-12-21 07:46 AM

very nice

last sentence is very good, i think

liked it

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-12-21 09:31 AM

Nice images here.
Very expressive in a compact little purse of gold.
Happy Holidays, with all the trimmings.
TD

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-12-21 09:31 AM

All the angels gathered for a pillow fight...'''

I love this, and that last line, what an image...perfect!
Lauren~

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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-12-21 10:07 AM

I loved the picture this
brought to my mind.

Hugs,

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