Open Poetry #30 |
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Spirits Arise |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state ![]() |
Come ye faithful spirits to mark a special birth rest your heads on boughs of laurel scented mirth share tales about stoked brick layered hearths wear trails of crimson tinted scarves... In Eden a man was created after all was debated plans were carefully consummated long before it dissipated but the spirit of rebirth is still within grasp a mark of what mankind searches for to clasp Ideas behind a legend born of virgin blood stand tall to make multitides believe without a whimper at his call there are so many other saintly figures that go in and out of history depends on political correctness of the time to balance human misery faithful spirits arise to mark a momentous birth children rest your weary heads on laurel scented mirth teach your parents that enough is enough 'bout crimson laden tales lost cause when adults are like children whose growth contines to fail... I will light candles for some days yet aware of a divine presence, heaven sent.. that loved ones are no longer here to witness, tis sad faithful spirits still arise when what's around turns bad. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-21-2003 01:46 AM).] |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
This is good so far. I'll be looking forward to the rest of it. GIS Application of knowledge is the basis of ability. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I do like your style -- I'll be watching to see where you go with this one. BEEEEEwell. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
finished...enjoyed the work in progress too ![]() |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very nice. Merry Christmas ![]() Terri~ ![]() Well I will go down with this ship |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks for sharing Shara..just polished oversome unsightly typos ![]() [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-21-2003 01:56 AM).] |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Enjoyed and somehow i think i know a few like taht too. Smile Jes |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ecrivan -- interesting thoughts and sentiments....I like! BEEEEEwell. Catch you later. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Faith and spirit mark us at the heart dear Martin, and carry with us through what life offers. Enjoyed this poem very much. With each candle, I wish you peace...and as you light them, may they burn eternal. TD |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks Jes, Kathleen It's Hannukah time and that's where the candles come in...like the double sense to the first line of the last stanza taken in context to the theme. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan An excellent write and happy Hannukah. |
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