Look In Your Eyes (7000th post)

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vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-12-20 10:07 AM

There is a look
In your face
It remind me of someone
The someone I lost
I saw you
at the fair
you disappear
at the fair
It stuck
In my head
I can't get out of my mind
I know
The look in your face
It reminds me of someone
The someone I know
The face
I can't forget
When it rains
It remind me of
those days of love
The love we had
Now
Love has gone
When sun comes out
In the morning
I think of you
I think of love
we had
It's funny
how time slips away
When I saw someone
The face
I never forget
It was amazing
The look in your eyes
I can tell
the love in you
But it is not the same girl
The girl I love
There is a look in your face
It remind me of someone
The someone I knew
In the past
how time goes fast
The someone I knew
The someone I lost
The girl Next door
It is so funny
How time slips away

[This message has been edited by vandana (12-20-2003 10:07 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-12-20 10:10 AM

I like the way the poem slips away, off the page, like time itself.
ENJOYED!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-12-20 10:19 AM

Congratulations on your 7000th post, Vandana! You have made great strides in your poetry, and your English. I enjoyed this very much!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-12-20 10:53 AM

7000 beautiful moments...and counting.

Eric

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-12-20 05:14 PM

(does happy dance) Yay! Oh Vandana, congratulations on 7000 golden posts, sweet friend, you are such a wonderful friend in my heart and I am so proud of your growing poetry and English, sweet friend, yay, here's to thousands more precious posts, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-12-20 05:33 PM

Congratulations on your 7000th...many beautiful writes.
Happy Holidays.
TD

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-12-20 08:32 PM

The other night I saw a woman and the minute I saw her I felt like I was looking at one of my old girlfriends...she looked similar in some ways but I think it was her personality and the way she moved that were so similar...it spooked me...congratulations on 7000....James

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2003-12-20 08:35 PM

7000 -- jeepers! ! ! You are a devoted soul, aren't you?! BEEEEEwell and happy holidays!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-12-20 08:54 PM

vandana - Congratulations on 7000 posts!
and thankyou for all of your nice comments on my poetry - you are a devoted Passions family member for sure. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2003-12-20 09:09 PM

WOW, 7000!
Congratulations!
I'll bet you write wonderful poetry in your native language.

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (12-20-2003 09:18 PM).]

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2003-12-22 06:18 PM

This is a grand poem in celebration
of your 7000th post!

Congratulations vandana, it has been time well spent!

Hugs~

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2003-12-22 08:41 PM

Excellent write, vandana. Congrats on 7000!!!

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2003-12-22 09:22 PM

wonderful work my friend. . . congrats on the 7,000!!!

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I am tired . . .

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

13 posted 2003-12-22 10:20 PM

Vandana,

This is beautiful... Congrats on it 7,000th.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2003-12-23 03:06 AM

yes, it is funny how time slips away...like it was never really there

congrats on your 7,000 posts!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2003-12-23 08:29 AM

Beautiful write Vandana. Congrats on the 7000!!

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