Open Poetry #30 |
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Mists of time 2001 |
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Steve Motuel Member
since 2003-12-19
Posts 72Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany ![]() |
The idea behind my first poem was to open the hearts and minds of the readers, the poem was intended to inspire and provoke... which it did! here is my reply which took many years to come through.. Within the mists of time he came a being whom we gave no name his eyes ablaze with buning fire the sweet warm flames of loves desire his every move precise and true and with his mouth a kiss he blew his hands they gestured out to me to let my fears and soul fly free with painted breath the words he spoke the joyous feelings within me choaked to win my heart for he did try no other man my love could buy the tender way his love caressed with subtle fingers me undressed his searching lips my body did find his being reached within my mind to hold him close and feel secure the fear and guilt I shall endure no one on earth could ever see the love this man had just for me I find in him a friend so dear I wish he'd be forever near to feel his breath upon my breast the things he does will do the rest Within the mists of time he came a being whom I'd give a name his eyes ablaze with burning fire the warmth within our loves desire [This message has been edited by Steve Motuel (12-19-2003 05:08 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awwwww..this is the sweetest thing.. This was just precious..Very romantic. Lovely it was to read. Terri~ ![]() Merry Christmas ![]() Well I will go down with this ship |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
steve, exceptional writing...i really enjoyed this very much. you surely have a talent! Happy Holidays, Amy ![]() "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This was a beautiful poem and a loving sentiment~ ~very nicely done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Steve Very romantic and I enjoyed the read. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Well worth the wait~enjoyed ~ARH ![]() Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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