Open Poetry #30 |
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With each breath our future reveals |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium ![]() |
I do not know our destiny but long for eyes to make me see the diamonds within our hearts so I can read our love on chart I know what happened in our past and all the spells by our hearts cast From first day on we formed a chain we were the best of all champagne Yet recently the bubbles left But what did cause this loss, this theft? It may have been the choice of fate to point us to a new soul mate Is this the truth, our tale will end? the death of all the time we spend Or would our hearts preserve their tie so we can dance on clouds up high Whatever luck our lives will face It shall bring us a better place Our hearts' desire will once come true With who or how? I wish I knew... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I fully understand this poem. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
How sweet...if only we knew the answers. Terri~ ![]() Merry Christmas ![]() Well I will go down with this ship |
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Steve Motuel Member
since 2003-12-19
Posts 72Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany |
A sad yet endearing poem... "And then there was nothing, only me and my thoughts..." Steve |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done. Welcome to Passions. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned....and much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Love is the journey of our lifetime -- happy journey. Good write. |
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