Open Poetry #30 |
'heaven" |
martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
he lay on the bed next to her, rubbing his hand over her soft pale flat tummy exposed by her fuzzy baby blue half top. he could almost feel her cramping as he smoothly caressed under her belly button, softly kissing it, laying his head gently there, whispering, "I Love You" and drifted off to sleep... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely.... Lauren~ I had a dream last night |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You captured a sweet moment, and the movement of action and feeling within it. That's good poetry..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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