Open Poetry #30 |
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Though I've Never Been to Madagascar . . . |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
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Though I've Never Been to Madagascar . . . A shadeburst appears across my screen I star-like pattern from over my shoulder I keep this tropical cyperus in a bright window Reminding of places I've been and of others imagined The sun here seems cold in its winter brightness Not warm like it must be through your window © 121703 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I tried to respond to this and was timed out... will give it another try...I had looked up your tropical plant...and could see where it's shape would give you a starburst or as you put it a shadeburst in a star-like pattern ![]() "The sun here seems cold in its winter brightness Not warm like it must be through your window"... yes it is warmer here when the sun shines but I love snow, so that gives me a warmth all its own... nice to read you, Kraw hugs M *just in case I get timed out again I copied this ![]() [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-17-2003 06:42 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The sun here seems cold in its winter brightness Not warm like it must be through your window" Wonderful words here..fantastic imagery. So good to read you tonight. Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
me neither but I have an active imagination loved that 'burst' line |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"The sun here seems cold in its winter brightness Not warm like it must be through your window" sir...your sun could never be cold...h |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pleasure to read you again ![]() |
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