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Until, you......
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Until, you...... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Until,you I didn’t know the ocean spoke, in every tongue didn’t know each wave was a song, yet sung didn’t know my heart had it’s own melody I didn’t know I could feel rhapsody I didn’t know mountains could be moved with emotion didn’t know river’s path could be stayed with devotion didn’t know the sunset blushed, from nights gentle kissing I didn’t know how much, I was missing I didn’t know I was living without direction, or clue I didn’t know love, until I found you ~SEA~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sue this is just so beautiful and tender and the graphic fits this just wonderfully. Another beautiful write from your heart pen. Merry Christmas to you, it is good to see your words again! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'm so honored and humbled that you wrote this to me....thank you so much sweets...Luv Toe.... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Donna, thanks so much  awww....Toe, you are so welcome   |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
FOR TOE????!!!!???? AW SHUCKS ... I thought it was for meeeee LOLWell I know one thing for sure... I WISH I HAD WROTE THIS!!!!!!! OH WELL.... Toe or not...Jon or not... I'm taking these line for mothyme I didn’t know the ocean spoke, in every tongue didn’t know each wave was a song, yet sung but then you already knew that I would. Can ya tell I like the poem???  Very cool write of heart rhymes Susan-girlie.  I can remember Forever December, |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet....(I'm just pretending it's for Toe, it really is for Jon....shhhhh, don't tell Toe....) thanks for your kind words....they mean a lot to me...*hugs*  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, as always, this is gorgeous...you are an amazing writer, and an even more amazing friend...i'm honored both by your friendship and the fact I'm able to read such pretty writing from such a pretty lady! take care, hugs! Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Gal, this is as gorgeous as they come~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sigh......this is lovely...so lovely Lauren~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a very sweet poem...and you know that Toe...he thinks we all write to him hugs and happy holidays, Susan M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lucky girl...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...simply beautiful. Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is sooooo beautiful, Sea. And, yes, exactly how I feel about my Love!! Hugs,  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully explored and written,,,ahhhhh how great love is.... Very much enjoyed! Merry Christmas |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this says "you" in a very special and loving way - Paul |
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Steve Motuel Member
since 2003-12-19
Posts 72Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany |
Hello Sue I found this poem to be one that speaks to the heart. A wonderful read and soooooo tender. Steve |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Soooooooooooooooo lovely. .............jo |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Oh my~looks like the relatives have not upset your heartstrings that is for sure. Lovely Sue. (Jon you lucky devil you!) |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Smooth as glass, and it's easy to see that every word was meant from the heart. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh what beautiful love this is wonderful I adore it Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There's so much joy in this.... a pleasure to read. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beauty this is, SEA... love shines through it! *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so gorgeous and now may "until" become "now and onward" forever! (kiss on cheek) Happy holidays, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a beautiful love poem, Susan....It would make a great Christmas gift! Hugs! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful writing lady |
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