Open Poetry #30 |
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Find Christmas This Year |
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Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The TV blares – go buy this now! As everyone runs to the mall But something is missing this year Something simple, something small Perhaps we seek in too high a place For a purpose to feel this season Look down at the smallest child To find the face of a reason The future lay in the eyes of him Who holds no office or vote He isn’t well known, no celebrity He isn’t a person of note He is the child within us Seeking ever to find the way To feel complete and happy To find joy on Christmas day Close your eyes and remember The joy of Christmas memories No longer do we need to buy Myriad gifts for all to please Give something simple from your heart Give something that can’t be bought You’ll find the joy of Christmas then In a memory you thought you forgot |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
He is the child within us Seeking ever to find the way To feel complete and happy To find joy on Christmas day Most enjoyed this read PoetFriend PDV Smiles2u *~coco*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
back to the basics nice write ![]() |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Very sweet poem, PdV. As for myself, I'll be giving those close to me a simple gift: Heartburn! (I'll be makin chili next week) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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Give something simple from your heart Give something that can’t be bought You’ll find the joy of Christmas then In a memory you thought you forgot ======================== Beautiful sentiments poetess Sharon... a message of truth that does indeed seem to be lost in the age of credit cards and endless debt. Rhymes deVine ![]() I can remember Forever December, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sharon this is simply lovely dear poetess. Such beauty in your words is found. Enjoyed much. Happy Holidays to you and yours. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I wish, I really do wish, more people thought of this...it is about the gift of being.....and togetherness Can you imagine, basing our entire economy on what is spent at Christmas time??????? Very very good one...many hugs and smiles |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Wrapped up in Holiday bind We search for true meaning Only to finally find It's within our own being Thanks for the wakeup call! WildPoet ![]() |
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Poet deVine
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Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind comments. This years holiday greeting was very hard to write. The spirit is just not with us at work for various reasons. I think this was the hardest holiday poem I've ever written so I do appreciate your feedback! ![]() [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (12-17-2003 10:51 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well if you had to do summoning up from the depths to find this one, you did a fantastic job. Hugs, lady and happiest of holidays. ![]() |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
it is so good that it must have been getting ready while you were struggling to do it - great poem - Paul |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
okay...now I REALLY feel like a grinch...j/k. Excellent write. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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You make it look so easy, Sharon! Beautifully done...and great advice! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Poetdevine~ Touching sentiments ... hope many take them to heart~ ![]() *HUGLETS* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful holiday poem. I love it. Thank you for sharing it. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, this is beautiful. I love the thoughts and truths in it. Thanks you for sharing it with us. Happy Holidays, Ethel |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I would certainly love it to go back to basics, for so many reasons. Hope others take heed as well from your wonderful poem Sharon. Merry Christmas. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such wise words....I think in all the hustle some people tend to forget what this season is really for....beautiful Sharon.... ~~ Lauren~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ May the miracle of Christmas touch your life with special blessing H A P P Y H O L I D A Y S [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (12-17-2003 11:18 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, may we remember that any gift given from the heart is golden and the simplest gift is the most beautiful one to give too! (angel hugs) I send many Yuletide hugs your way, happy holidays, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
your poem makes me stop and think,,,,of how people overlook the real meaning of any holiday,,,,,a childs eyes can see thru anything,,,including the fakery of flash and spangle,,,ty for your words,,they ring very true. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Truth set to music -- thank you, and the happiest of holidays to you, Sharon. |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
All I'm gonna say is I'm with you on this one.... ![]() ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sharon, if we could all find that child within, the world might find a new begin. Merry Christmas, my friend. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sharon, how true this write is. We must all get back to basics....back to the real meaning of Christmas. Maybe if we did, our inner child would come out of hiding and play in a world of peace. hugs, Chris ![]() |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all again...this was my Holiday Poem instead of a card. I don't buy cards anymore I write a poem and print it on fancy holiday paper. It's more personal than a card I buy. |
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