First Love (at Tony's request)

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First Love (at Tony's request)

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2003-12-16 10:06 PM

OK, Tony. This is for you per your request:

First Love

There once was a lady from Penniman
Who taught first grade, and then again
At Christmas I missed her, while she gained a Mister
She shattered my heart and then some.

Antonio_L
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since 2003-12-01

Posts 110
NorthEast USA

1 posted 2003-12-17 02:14 AM

All right mister, de gloves are off!

I like your wee story Steav-en,
of your teacher who gained a new man,
but if she shattered your heart,
that was but a new start,
to woo all the other girls in the land!

Ooooohh ho ho ho ho...
Merry Christmas buddy,

Tony.

[This message has been edited by Antonio_L (12-17-2003 02:15 AM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-12-17 06:39 AM

Very cute!

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2003-12-17 11:47 AM

‘Tis my story, sad but true
of the one that got away
for never would my heart beat anew
after that sad, fateful day.
No others could make my heart feel alive
for unlike you, my dear sir, I was only five!

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2003-12-17 11:57 AM

oops...errrrrr....forgot

thanks Tony and Sunshine for your comments

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