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Open Poetry #30

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-12-16 04:07 PM

Long forgotten ‘neath the dust discarded wood
Once silenced in the ashes of sorrow’s Pompeii
Hibernated, sleep now melts away
The recall of affection blooms
And shivers in the glistening first dew
Droplets fall upon my lips
As I look up into full blue pools
Traveling the slaloms of my emotions
In ski upon the satin slopes
Catching my attention in their trickle
Traveling throughout
Awakening me
A radiance to wear
Covered only in your stare
Wrapped in only you

You find the vastness frightening
Moving closer, holding back
And yet, you linger here with me
As we tangle into molten waterfalls
Blending needs and desires
Into love showers that bathe us in recall
To never leave the stirring of your breath upon my lips
Close…closer…each turn and shift engaged
Exploring every secret place
Every pleasured trace thermal runs rivers
And near you in the shivers
I am lit again

Copyright Kkh 12/16/03

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-12-16 04:22 PM

well done !

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2003-12-16 07:39 PM

though love poems are my least favorite of all styles, I found myself mesmerized by your exquisite use of imagery. Excellent!

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2003-12-16 07:41 PM

I loved this - great imagery and very engaging - Paul

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