Open Poetry #30 |
Color |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
In a world of gray illusions - You alone would stand adorned. And I would dream in color. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc You seem to have a talent for capturing an emotion with just a few words...this was beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Immediately, I saw the alabaster pinken... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
so many colors ... such beauty in this.... Lauren~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
My God, Eric... This is simply incredible. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Holy.....wow. This hit me hard. I'm glad I got to read this one |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A colorful write! ~ and especially precious. Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OUTSTANDING with such brevity so much has been said. I adore this. It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Magnificent. Short, Sweet and to the point! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Eric!! Excellent! Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Nice one, Eric. Jason |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning! |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Eric, I enjoyed this... Very nice. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
wow, this is incredibly vivid and full joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Splendid. TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it ~~ inspired me: Awake to You In a world of gray illusions - You alone would stand adorned. And I would dream in color. Awake to you each morn... Eyes of blue, intense upon translation lost on me. You alone would stand adorned unwrapped for me to see. The color of true happiness, a value in your touch. You alone would stand adorned and share my love of such. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-16-2003 04:54 PM).] |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I liked this a lot. It was a great read. So short, yet so sweet. You got the point across very well! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
so few words, so much emotion. nice... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome! Iliana |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I do dream in color....in fact, I'm doing it right now. Thanks for getting it started! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are the colors of love, infinite shades of beauty. I love you. Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And may you always dream in technicolor with rainbows of love always being bows to your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is a poetic blessing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Such sweet, perfect, divine beauty in the most exquisite of expressions... Wonderful... pure magic. Aaaahhhhh... I love you, Moca |
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