Open Poetry #30 |
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Flying Lessons or Knowing Your Flight Log |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Flying Lessons or Knowing Your Flight Log look you truly do not understand my heart I have dreams with wings painfully taught in lessons afraid alone and broken I learned to fly I am now unable to sit breath suspended in your uncompromisization on ragged rough angles disappointing my life on the possibility of waiting for edges that may never melt to smooth real love is not in the take off it is in the landing [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (12-15-2003 03:19 PM).] |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
h As I'm sure I have said before, you are indeed skilled at endings. This one is wise as well. [[[hugs]]] for your disappointment s.a.g. [This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (12-15-2003 03:40 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
powerful description of the struggles of love - you write for the deep self - loved it - Paul |
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