Open Poetry #30 |
It Seems This Heart |
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
It Seems This Heart It seems this heart can not know ease - -Without thy kisses or a squeeze. 'Tis you that makes my life complete, So ask me not to be discrete. "I love you," there's no other truth, Our love is the fountain of youth, So in its' waters I will swim, Until I have sung every hymn. 'Tis thee I dream of every night, In fields of green and sweet delight, Yea sleepless days bring naught but ache, So ask me ne'er my love to wake. My yesterdays are but a curse, For life without thee is perverse. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kevin, this is a beautiful love poem!! You knew that this hopeless romantic would love it, didn't you? LOL Very good writing and devine rhymes, my friend. Hugs, |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Thank-you garysgirl for reading both of the poems I wrote this morning. I lost my muse there for a while but today I woke up and my mind was just fired up with ideas. Both of these poems ripped out of my head in 30 minutes. I feel better knowing that my gift for rhyme has returned. (Wink!) Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where have you been keeping yourself? We've missed you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Kevin...your lady is very lucky indeed! So very beautiful are your verses this wintery morn. I'm so glad your muse has returned. You were missed. *wink* Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Kevin, you may not write much but when you do, I'm knocked off my feet... don't cut yourself short about your talent...you too have the gift |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am enjoying very much the gift that you share with us.....very well done Kevin. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey there my dear friend, I love this totally. I want to read the others but I need to go to work here. I know I'll love the others too. Lots of Ribbits and ribbits. (You know what I mean) ;-) |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
That was excellent, no other word will do! Tony. |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
Ooo...this is lovely! Romance with a rhythm! I enjoyed. Thankyou for sharing. -Whisper |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi evocative one...good to see you...your poem is beautiful and very romantic...loved it! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
EV, So glad to see you again! I missed reading yours. Hope all finds you well. (This poem makes it sound all is just great!) You do have a way with words-this was beautiful. Sadelite |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Had to read this one again. I really do love this one. ;-) Ribbits and ribbits |
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